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by nobody truly knows me
This was amazing. the rhymes were good, and the rhythmn held throughout the poem. i thouroughly enjoyed this.
"I shall not float to heaven,
Graceful as a swan,
On wings of fire, I'll find my way,
Lit up like the dawn."
this was a good start to the poem. it intrigued me, and made me want to continue reading. excellent job.
by im not the cause
Wow really good its amazing i love the rhyming and i love the first and last stanzas
shattered pieces of a broken heart