Comments : On Wings Of Fire

  • 10 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    This was amazing. the rhymes were good, and the rhythmn held throughout the poem. i thouroughly enjoyed this.

    "I shall not float to heaven,
    Graceful as a swan,
    On wings of fire, I'll find my way,
    Lit up like the dawn."

    this was a good start to the poem. it intrigued me, and made me want to continue reading. excellent job.

  • 10 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow really good its amazing i love the rhyming and i love the first and last stanzas

    5/5
    shattered pieces of a broken heart