I can really relate to this; great job, keep it up 5/5

I know exaclty where this came from!! well done x

I like this piece. Simple and to the point. Your message is clearly conveyed, and the reader can understand easily what you're going through.
I thought the structure was good 2 short lines and a longer line, and the rhyming flowed well with no forced words.
Nice piece :)

Sole x