Very touching poem and hard topic to write about, you did good well done x

Vry nicely written. it was a well written story and made alot of sence

This is touching and sensitive poem. liked it. has a nice flow and rhyme. good one!

Omg this made me want to cry is beautiful i love ong awwww, ((5))

Wow very very deep... at first i read it as a literal message, a monster... i was in a fanatsy... but no it was merely a metaphor for a deadly thing.. cancer. great job. loved this. btw thanks for reading my poems. :)

This poem was so good becuase of the ending. You'd expect to hear about a monster, a vicious killer in flesh that kills people, but you discovered instead that the killer is one of the deadliest illneses, cancer.
The poem was well written with the right choosing of words and rhyming. Excellent job 5/5

Another great poem, shorter but to the point. You capture the feelings behind this poem and really emphasize them so that the reader can catch it while reading.
"He fights against you even through the night
You are unsure how long you can keep up the fight." These lines stuck out the most. It's a scary thought to think that something will never stop fighting you. This poem flowed very smoothly, a great poem. (5/5)