Comments : Oh Beautiful One

  • 15 years ago

    by Fear2love

    ~oh beautiful one
    For your day
    Is finally
    Over.
    For you..
    Can fool
    everyone,
    But
    yourself.~
    my fav. line
    ur a super cool poet, keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is AMAZING babe...
    you know i will be here if you ever need a shoulder to cry on... or an ear to listen.

    great job!

    Ashely

  • 15 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow i know this exact feeling i like this poem quite a bit its written defferently but it worked good job keep up the writing!! 5/5

    Laura