A Bloody Goodbye

by HidinVictim   May 8, 2008


Fingers like razor blades
So grip my throat,
Hold on tight
Baby please, end my life.

Feel my pulse?
I'm still alive
Your not doing the job right.

Allow me to help
Here's his number
He knows how,
Make my life a living hell.

He'd grip my throat
Whisper his lies;
Say he loves me,
One last time.

My blood would flow
And my pulse would die,
A single tear would leave my eye.

All the pain he gave
He didn't even try
As he'd sing me lullabies
His final goodbye...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Alice

    That was amazing! From start to finish it was really great. I enjoyed it because the use of words wasn't expected it was really a great descriptive poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Sweetest way for ex fake play

  • 15 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    Great poem, i'd love you you could vote/comment some of my poems

  • 15 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    That was #ucking awesome!!! i loved it sweet job

    really creepy and depressing but greatly written

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Rebecca

    That was so sad and depresing but an amazing peace of poetry

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