A beautifully scripted poem... Sounds to me as if I am watching some kind of a ballad. Mind blowing is not the exact word which can be used to describe this poem... Coz this poem should be rated high above mindblowing. What made me mesmerise the most was one particular stanza and that is the starting itself. Wow! What a way to start the poem. Keep writing this way... Rock On!
This actually makes me want to read
The book of the gods.
I have a fascination with it. But I could never keep awake.
Really good writing.
9 years ago
Ohmigod that was amazing! The way you start the poem "My lonley princess.." was such a great hook and you reeled me in.
Come lie within the ruins that is my heart,
Viciously torn to shreds by his daunting voice.
These pillars of Chaos hold bitter vengeance,
Deep within hollow walls of crimson blood.
^^^ That is personally my favorite stanza.
Your choice of vocabulary really added to the atmosphere of this poem. It is incredible how so few words can grab my mind and pull me deep, feeling the emotions you displayed.
Brilliant job!! I love it! *clicks to add to favorites*