Spoken Prophecy (Collab)

by Spoken Silence   May 9, 2008


** This is a poem that me and Lethal Prophecy wrote together. Enjoy!.**

How can you be so beautiful and care for me so?

Because I love you and my love for you shall last as long as the oceans waves hit the shore.
As long as the sun rises and the stars are in the sky,
That is how long I shall love you,
You are perfect to me
Everything you are is what draws me to you

But eventually the sun, along with the stars,
Shall one day burn out

But once they do there will be new life,
And that new life will be my new love for you.

My love for you shall remain the same,
For it can be no greater an emotion then what it has grown to be.

My emotions for you are so strong,
Sometimes it feels like I've lost my way
But I have your heart to guide me as you have mine.
Your heart is like a compass to me,
The arrow is always leading me to you.
My love for you is like a circle,
Once I get to the top I fall in love with you all over again

You are to me like water to the sea,
Without it everything inside will die
You are my purpose,my reason for being,
These words are of truth,not one a lie

You are to me like the earth and the moon,
Without you I'd be worthless.

And like the earth and the moon,
How we compliment each other is flawless

And with every word you speak you make me smile,
I just wish I could be with you,
Even if just for a while,

You are the earth and I am the moon,
You attract me as I constantly orbit
Never changing course,
For it is you who I long for

For however long fate keeps us apart,
I shall always have a hole the size of you in my heart.
You are my wish, my fantasy, my joy.
I need not the army of my heart to deploy.

You came to me unexpectedly,
You hit my heart with your love stained dart.
Poetry is what we know, poetry is what we write,
And we can finally be together in this endless poem.

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This is so beautiful, I'm glad I read it :)
    Lovely work
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's , me's, my's, the flow is off, too many filler words. It was a nice sentiment but not deserving of the front page. I thought I commented on this poem already. My criticism must have magically disappeared. You have to take both the good and the bad. Perhaps your friends don't give an honest opinion. Sorry, I will.

  • 15 years ago

    by Marwa

    So sweetttt!!!!!!!!!!
    keep da poem up luvin dis!!

  • 15 years ago

    by benjamin

    Wow .. thats a handfull of words to say to someone.. great symbolisim and i love how you say shes everything .. the one that makes you live..

  • 15 years ago

    by BeMusEd

    Great poem... Very full of emotions.. And I think you are very much inlove.. Congrats...

    Keep it up...

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