Comments : Just Want To Be Me

  • 15 years ago

    by James Alexander

    I like.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Gilbertson

    A great statement. Honestly ive written the same kind of stuff, and its a way of telling the world, "YOUR HERE", and there isnt anything they can do. =]
    Good work

    -Kaitlyn

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    I jus want 2 b me..... lovely topic n excellent write..

    keep writing..

    best wishz... karan

  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Very good read, though serious for the most part the closure brought a chuckle.
    The only thing that I could think to change would be the use of "i" for the pronoun I, but then I'm old and it is just an opinion.

  • 15 years ago

    by maida

    I like your poem alot.....specially the last stanza!
    Keep it up and write down as many lively poems as you can!
    I'm sure you will do better!
    Maida!

  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I liked how you ended it with good night. lol. I could see you turning over to the lamp and hitting the lights as it all fades to black. a 5/5 poem indeed.