Comments : A NEW LOVE!

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittney

    Awwww this is a very cute poem.but all i have to say is make sure he really really does like you for who you are and not just for what you got okay.....get to know him alot more and watch his every move okay??? i thought i found my love but then again he didn't want me he just wanted to get in my pants....just becarefl and don't let him take advantage and force you to do things unless its wat you want..................... think kk.

  • 15 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I like your rhyme scheme, this made the poem flow very well. Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    :D This poem is beautiful hunni! I love it to the max!!! 10/10 for this poem!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Awwww this poem is soo cute
    i like it