This was so cute and sad too. It had a sound of distain and then you finished it off greatly. Awesome as always

-mello193

^^' i think i've read almost all your poems now lol
aaa i just love the way you see things, and describe them !

-Who wants to live forever?
When forever is so long- simple but true.
n_n very nice poem

That is so great..I did like it ..keep it up5/5

Wow ... I'll have to tell you that I didn't see this ending coming. It was a great twist ! You've managed your lines very well, in a way the convinced the reader ,somehow, that hope still exist even in a dark & empty world such as ours.... 5/5

Awww, that's soo sweet.
Great right... keep it up

I LOVE this! :] its perfectly written and totally captures the audience and draws you in. your poems are all so amazing! you are such a good writer. you reali should get some stuff published. this one is def one of my favs tho. :]

Diffent but good 4/3

Diffent but good 4/5

Diffent but good 4/5