The name caught my eye
had to read the poem
it's very cute, sweet, and happy
love coma-like the word you chose
good work

Its so goergous!
i love it
((5))

It had it's need of fix-ups, but it was such an enjoyable read.

please do not let
`I think it would flow better if it were "don't" instead of do not.

little feelings
`you use it twice in two lines that come right after each other, and the repetition makes the piece sound less smooth . same goes for the "three words" in the two lines after that.

But we know now, and we still drink our lemonades,
Sometimes they're tart and your kisses take away the shock,
Putting me into something sort of like a diabetic coma-
`This made me smile :) It's fascinatingly cute, and charming. It's so real ... and the emotion is just evident that the sweetness is overwhelming.

Even if your hair is a mess, or you have a hole in your shirt,
`HAHAHA I love this poem!

You have a way of writing that's REAL. It's not full of confusing meanings that you have to look for, and yet it's ... deep, because your emotions are running through the lines. Beautifully written, love.

..__MiNDYY