Comments : Silently

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow that was so good very amazing i feel the same way..... i thought it was just me.
    keep up the good work
    lostsoul101 aka jaidy

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, a really great poem! Every line was so heartfelt and had so much feeling in it. I loved your ending stanza:

    "I feel as if I've never existed,
    Nothing more than a broken dream,
    Drifting away from this reality,
    As the tears fall so very silently"

    Very strong words, which results in a good strong ending. You really made this well and I absolutely love it!