Cool

I liked it great job!

I hope that ur life isnt really pointles!!!..sad...u must have something to live for!!!!!

as for the poem itself , it was great!..good job dylan!!

Aly

I liked that it was really short cause it got to the point. And i want you to know that no ones life is pointless it may seem that way at the moment but when your in your happy place you see that you are here for a reason. Everyone has a pourpose here on earth untill we live it out its just a waiting game! But i did love it! Great Job Dylan! 5/5 always jayjay

Wow that was well discribed. and it has a lot of enmotion and feelings that discribes what you are. so i give it a 5/5

Short yet powerful, excellent job, out of all the poems iv'e read all night this is my fav by far.
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Excellent.

Wow!! it is short but say so much.. that u r suffering.. I love it how ur witten the poem. short but meaningful... Take Care =)

Short, and to the point
:D
i loved it...
i feel the exact same way
(:
5/5
great job!

Short and to the point
liked you descriptions
5/5
Broken and cold,
My heart-- like this part, good image

This poem is sad yet very beautiful. It simply sounds good.

Your writing style is good. In few words you've expressed your feelings. Well constructed poem. Good work!

I liked it a lot. Kind of reminds me of my life. Good job, keep up the good work

I love it and i really can relly 2 it