Sometimes i have this feeling

by waiting 4 some1   May 12, 2008


Sometimes I have this feeling
Where I want to shout very loud
Just to take off all the stress
And for my worries I let them out

Sometimes I feel so lonely
Like I am the only person in this world
I wonder why people can't see me
I wonder why I am being ignored

My best friend always says
"I wish I can pay you back"
He forgot the main important thing;
His caring is what I lack

My heart is getting weaker
Yet no one hear my cries
I always give those faking smiles
If only someone looked at my eyes

Sometimes I have this feeling
Where I want to fly very far
To live away from people
To live between the stars

Sometimes I wish to stay inside a cave
I want to stay there forever
I want to see if someone will ask about me
But I doubt someone will bother

I don't know what's wrong with me
And why I feel leaving this land?
I don't know what I really miss
But maybe someone to hold my hand

Yeah, I guess this is what I need
A partner for my soul and heart
Someone like true friend or lover
Someone to fill my missing parts

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  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Oh my god. i can ensure you that this was the most magnificent poem i have ever read, each word of it described my situation, because i have always felt the same thing that you felt, but i couldn't really express this feeling to the people around me because i couldn't find words, but i guess you have found them.
    what amazing.

  • 15 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "Yeah, I guess this is what I need
    A partner for my soul and heart
    Someone like true friend or lover
    Someone to fill my missing parts"

    the ending was thee best part.
    it is so relateable and the emotions were so raw, nice write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Great poem, describes everyone's life at some point.

    "Yeah, I guess this is what I need
    A partner for my soul and heart
    Someone like true friend or lover
    Someone to fill my missing parts"

    This part was amazing. Everyone needs that, everyone is looking for that.

  • 15 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    I really enjoy this poem so much , and i know this feeling very well :) believe me if u feel all that that mean u r a good person and it very hard to find good ppl who will understand u. so u have to be happy and i hop u fine good and honest ppl in ur life .
    well done.5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I really like this poem Adel. I can tell it is really from your heart and you mean every word. I know this feeling. I hope that everything is ok with you.
    Listen to this advice: keep praying, and God will give you Someone to hold your hand.