What a sad write here, i like how you have described your grief in this, grief hits you at any stage and when it does it takes ages to heal...I hope you are coping ok...

Well i though was good, i like how u can show your self in your poems. that good. i loved it.keep up the great work:)

Thats really good well done for writing this x

A sad one.. nicely written n things happen n we feel so sad tat we feel like grabbing someone n crying all tears..

N when we go out with sumthing sad running in our thoughts n frenz can clearly make out our mood..... n they ask...?

N it is than we suddenly start crying all our tears that can hide in our eyes noi more...

N ur poem said aqll.... a lovely sad n touching poem..

keep it up...

Best Wishes...

Karan