I think there are too many you's, I also don't like the use of hmmmmm in a poem. I do think the poem was creative although the flow could use some tweaking too. I think you did a decent job on it. It could be a lot better if you use some of the suggestions you've received.
'A door does close, yet another opens invitingly wide.
Abstracting the real world, your taboo thoughts? Liberalized.'
There's something about the second line, the fact that it's techinically two lines kind of breaks the flow for me.
'Subconsciously re-collating, hmmm 'De Ja Vu'?
Has it been done before? Or is it ambition the craves you.'
The 'hmmm' displeases me, I would've prefered to see something more like, 'Is this de ja vu?'
The question mark in the middle of the second line breaks the momentum of the second and is unneeded.
'Surrealistic clash of a frame of ones mind.
A collection of memories saved up over time.'
Just thought I'd be a lil simple and just say I like this stanza.
'Do you control ones mind? Maybe it controls you?
Giving physiological impacts, that help you understand what to do.'
I would prefer to see the question mark replaced with a colon.
'A dream; An imagination exploring ones inner state.
Waking up in the morning and discovering a fate.'
I see these two lines as something I think of inferring in much of my work that I am working on.
Your dreams which can present with a perfect world, but when you open your eyes it turns out to be quite the lie.
This is generally a good poem, just needs minor grammer fixing.
I read the comments by "The Tasteless" and then your poem, I stay with my original words. I think "re-collating" does fit. Proper word usage is important! Inside and closed are not opposites(?), it reads well.
I don't struggle with the 'you'. i struggle with the 'doth' it just seems a bit, out of place considering the contemporary style of the poem - you might of meant some special meaning, i might be thick.
i really enjoyed this, quite beautiful. especially the closing lines.