Excellent!Simply brilliant!Word choice was perfect.Flow was great.Very good.5/5

-Amber

Wonderfully written, with a great flow..I tend to use dashes too, but it didn't seem like it took away from the flow or caused any awkward stops for the reader.. so I thought that was fine to put in there.. Umm, greatly written.. I see no flaws to be honest with you.. I liked how the title was used in the poem, it fit perfectly.. annd lastly, if I had to pick a favorite stanza it'd have to be the last one, it was simple and to the point and tied it all up very nicely.

5/5.

I'm standing alone in need of the answers,
that I know you'll never give to me.
But, it makes you that much stronger
since it makes you feel alive.

^^ Sadly so, some people feel the need to have control over the other by depriving them of an insight in their feelings....

Great poem:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

See it took me awhile to understand it but i finally got it. i hate men that are like that kinda saddening to control something that only wants to love you. great piece though
~Raindrops 5/5