Comments : Just A Bit Delusional.

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like this well done xx

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 15 years ago

    by El

    Very powerful poem
    It is well writen and i like the way the lines are short and in quick sucession (sp?)

  • Short but very good.Your word choice here was utterly fantastic.Very well written.5/5

    -Amber

  • 15 years ago

    by lisa marie

    I like the how these lines were repeated

    "and the circumstance, it seems
    just a bit delusional. "

    and the word choice was great.