Lifeless life

by your love is mine   May 15, 2008


Can't find the light,
of this hole I'm in.
I'm looking for something bright.
Hope I made no sin.

My life is now upside down,
and I can't live this way.
Wich I can turn it around.
What do I have to say?

I want to live my life,
but lot like this.
So I'll leave this wolrd with this last kiss.

Note to the people I hope you like it and hope you comment this poem.=)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jasmine

    Yeah i like this poem love how u make it rhyme i give it a... dandandan
    5/5 =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Good job...short but included ur idea...keep it up:)

  • 15 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    I lyke this 1........I liked how u made it rhyme.......5/5 : )