Honest

by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX   May 15, 2008


You told me to always be honest with people in life and some thing good would happen..

sooo....i did..

i told you i hated you,

i told you i didn't want you anymore..

and you got mad. but i just said i was only being honest..

and out of no where i got more feelings.sooo..

i told you that i hated looking at you..

i told you i couldn't stand you..

i told you the only reason i stayed with you for 9 months was because i didn't want to hurt you..
even though i did..

i told you the truth about everything and how i felt about you.
and you still didn't like it, but you told me to still always be honest with people...

soo..i was and look where it got me..

all alone..with no friends.
always depressed..
always scared of what might happen next....

but at least i can say i have always been honest...
even though i feel really bad about it...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww this is a great piece! I think we can all really relate to this piece pretty well! It's always hard to tell the truth!

  • 15 years ago

    by adroit

    What a sad but interesting poem. It flows great, and it has such a meaningful message. People say they want the truth, but they're really lying. Keep Writing. Honest Luck

    Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by Darya

    This is a great poem
    and its true i mean we say the truth but some people just dont want to hear it

  • 15 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    I like the cocept. how always being honest will get you nothing but you do it anyways, great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Truth hurts

    Not much of people would not have told the truth, and much of people would rather get off their chest to say the truth but afraid at the same time. Being honest is good but not always.

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