Savour This

Savour This
Never say never, Never say always. Enjoy what life has to offer from your teenage kicks to your retirement, from your first kiss to your last breath. Everyone goes through phases, its a part of human nature for the mind to be dynamic.

*I like the tone of this poem. It's very relaxed and calm almost like a conversation to a friend. I loved the way you worded things as well. Your diction is simple but it gets the point across. I'm not a very big fan or long syntax but it works here.*

Friends should keep you on a steady path, not to a destination but to your destiny, make sure you're there for your loved ones, everyone needs someone sometime especially when its you. Trust is a fragile word while paranoia is futile.

*I felt the first few lines were wordy. I get what you're saying just wish you would have placed your words more carefully. A lot of filler words that can be removed. But the liast line was perfect. Very well said*

Keep Clean, first impressions are vital for relationships, friendships or just a stranger walking or waiting, to nor on There special one. Dreams Lets them Flow but contain yourself in reality, respect the notion of others whether if for or against

*Should "lets" be "let"? *

Cherish priceless memories, Share heartfelt moments.

*I liked this line as well. Very simple wording but gets the point across well*

Don't Brag, Don't condemn Yourself, Because in life there will be always someone higher and lower than you, more powerful, or less fortunate than you...

*I'd take out the always, doesn't need to be there. Didn't really like the ending too much, felt like there was more to come. But anyways I liked your message. Very true and profound. Just work on your delivery next time. Keep it up. -Nik*

Very true words indeed. Their will always be somebody with more money or more skill than you at certain things but there will always be somebody who isn't as good or rich. Cherish the things and talents you do have and learn to live without the rest. Fantastic job on this really well done and honest.

Very true. i liked this one best: "Friends should keep you on a steady path, not to a destination but to your destiny" great job!