Comments : Seasons of Love

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    I love this poem! You used an incredible selection of words and imagery in this. Ugh, Love it

    I think there is a typo in the title

    Is it supposed to be "The Hottest Love Has the Coldest End?

    Also, a possible suggestion:

    It's winter and snow flies
    extinguishing the last
    little bit of fire
    from your eyes

    I think it might be a better idea to say

    It's winter and snow flies
    extinguishing the last bit of fire
    from your eyes

    It keeps the pattern of the rest of the poem and flows better in my opinion.

    Loved it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Love through the seasons.

    Nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lisa

    I love this poem...great work 5/5