I Hope You're Proud

by Forever Broken   May 19, 2008


So tell me was it all you thought it would be?
Was it worth doing all that you did to me?
If you could would you do it again?
Would you break my heart till it was unable to mend?
You used to mean so much to me,
Now your selfish decision won't let me be.
You stole my heart from my chest,
It hurt me so bad my mind can't rest.
It races with thoughts of hatred for you,
And all of the things I let you do.
Because of love for you that I once had,
So congratulations, you've driven me mad.

this poem is about my first love and how he took advantage of the love I had for him. He used me for one thing and one thing only, and once he got it, he broke my heart. This poem is very old but I still wanted to put it up. Plz comment it. thnx

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  • 15 years ago

    by lilscars

    That is such an amazing poem..i love how it rhymes and tells a story 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Wow amazing poem! this guy souds sooo stupid and he probably missed out on a great relationship...

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    This guy sounds really stupid!
    real sad poem, tugged at my heart strings
    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    A heartfelt and emotional poem so well written. Your feelings were well captured here and forces the reader to relive those memories.
    It's really sad the way love can drive you to do things that you would never once have considered doing and others take advantage of that. And yet life still goes on and from each mistake we learn something that may help us to become someone.

    Excellent poem! 5/5

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