Comments : Kittens

  • 9 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Naww, this poem is so sweet. the short, simple ones are always the cutest and if i could rate it past 5, i would but, alas, no. i love the way you wrote this, it flowed great together and the rhyme was brilliant 5/5

    Good luck with the contest, hun

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 9 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Nice write, cute and descriptive. Bet it was fun to produce, now tend to those kitties.

  • The poem was great. Very consistent. Five out of five material.

    Unfortunately a kitten died two weeks ago on Saturday. I have a poem about it called Blacky Died if you're interested. :(

  • 9 years ago

    by Krysten

    This was really cute. you captured the way of kittens completly!!! its off a little from my style of poety but still really good. another 5/5

    krys (the punkrock princess)

  • 9 years ago

    by Just Jade

    Short and sweet
    brilliant writing
    really enjoyable
    5 outa 5

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The flow and imagery of this poem is outstanding yet it could stand on its cuteness alone. You have a lot of tallent

  • 9 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww. That was adorable. It described exactly how little kittens are. I literally could picture one. You did a great job on this one. Keep it up.

  • As a cat fanatic, this poem was just perfect. It was short and sweet. Kittens are such the cutest things and I love to watch them play. You described them exactly right. Keep up the good work.

  • 9 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    Aww this poem is just so adorable!!! who doesnt love kittens!!! This poem was short but sweet. Perfect! 5/5 =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This is the cutest poem I've ever read...I liked it so much and since I love kittens.I'm amazed to find someone who writes about them...good job...keep it up5/5..

  • 9 years ago

    by The Monster you Trust

    This one I like.. It's a bite too cutesy for me but it wasnt too bad. I suffered through it :P

    good job =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Diamondz

    Awww. That was adorable. It described exactly how little kittens are. I literally could picture one. You did a great job on this one. Keep it up.
    5/5 please keep it up
    love your poem
    *DIAMONDZ*

  • 9 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    Awwww this is so cute! And you descibe the kittens very well =) great job
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by michelle

    Lol!! i love it!!!!

    Very descriptive and your rhyming flows really well!!! wish i could write like you!!!

    Keep it up!

    XXXXMichelle

  • 9 years ago

    by Miss Lovely

    I love it!
    I have never heard a poem about an animal, that was that good!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    I ve never read a poem about a kitten
    its was just so sweet n_n really brings a smile out

    ^^

  • 9 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    This is such a cute poem!! Great creativity!
    I looove kitttens, their soo adorable!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    So right we have 10 of them.