Deana
what a heartfelt touching poem. It reminds me of young people living away from home and seeing and doing things they should not even know about. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Take Care Cindy

Deana,

What a touching poem. You really surprised me with this one. I often wonder about that question too: could my love change the ways of those who have lost their way?

Hugs,

Ingrid

Very sensual....

Congrats on your win once again :)
Take care Cindy

Awwww... I wish I had someone like that

This is so sweet. I extremely like how you didn't go into a predictable rhythm, and added an upbeat at places. Lovely... 5.

Really nice! ur a genius!