Comments : Would You Come With ME

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    what a heartfelt touching poem. It reminds me of young people living away from home and seeing and doing things they should not even know about. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Deana,

    What a touching poem. You really surprised me with this one. I often wonder about that question too: could my love change the ways of those who have lost their way?

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • Very sensual....

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win once again :)
    Take care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awwww... I wish I had someone like that

  • 9 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    This is so sweet. I extremely like how you didn't go into a predictable rhythm, and added an upbeat at places. Lovely... 5.

  • 9 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Really nice! ur a genius!