Comments : Winds Of Change

  • 9 years ago

    by Ari

    I enjoyed this very much. i must say you are a wonerful writer. I enjoy your poems a lot. please keep it up.
    xox
    ariel

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow... beautiful write...

    "Winds of change blow once more"

    ^^ starting each stanza with it has added more beauty to the poem...

    how you described the different stages - from childood to motherhood to death - is excellent..and very touching also...

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Motherhood she embraced
    Filling a heart with unknown love
    Finding herself in one small face"

    ^^the last two lines are so beautiful... Motherhood is one the best part of a women's life ... its so very well described...

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Life left shattered all alone
    True love taken away too soon
    Names engraved upon a stone"

    ^^ this is so touching...
    'Names engraved upon a stone'
    ^^ very hearfelt...

    an excellent write... I enjoyed reading it...

    keep writing.. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    An absolutely touching piece of poetry. brilliantly penned, amazing wording and rhyme.

    Winds of change blow once more
    Glimpses of future hopes and dreams
    True love opens her heart to heal
    Happiness hers again it seems

    Winds of change blow once more
    Motherhood she embraced
    Filling a heart with unknown love
    Finding herself in one small face
    ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
    i couldn't decide which of these two stanzas touched me the most.

    a deep, well written piece, Cindy. 5/5

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Motherhood she embraced
    Filling a heart with unknown love
    Finding herself in one small face

    These lines stood out for me, Cindy. Like you, I love my son to bits too:)
    A very beautiful poem, my sweet girlfriend.

    Love, always

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    First Cindy...congrats on placing in the conyest! You know I told you when you read it to me that it was a winner!

    I love how the winds of change blow through each verse with the perfect flow of the circle of life....

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Motherhood she embraced
    Filling a heart with unknown love
    Finding herself in one small face"

    ^So precious that love of a mother for a child....this is so perfectly worded....that unknown love that sweeps in so unexpectedly to a young mother's heart....

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Life left shattered all alone
    True love taken away too soon
    Names engraved upon a stone"

    ^ and as the winds of change blow....so the circle of life closes to completion...such a sad verse....the imagery is heartbreaking.....

    "Winds of change blow once more
    For each death a new life starts
    Hers has come full circle
    New memories filling hearts"

    ^ and the circle completes to only begin again!

    One of your best! Nicely done! Debbie

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Winds of change blow once more
    Lifting dust layered memories
    Exposing year's painful trails
    Thoughts swirling on a breeze

    Outstanding opening of such a lovely poem. Loved the repeatation of the first line, it surely added that extra punch in the poem.

    'Winds of change blow once more'

    lovely line, could feel the passion in between words.

    Winds of change blow once more
    Glimpses of future hopes and dreams
    True love opens her heart to heal
    Happiness hers again it seems

    seems like the best days of life.. :)

    loved the complete poem dear

    all the best and take care

    Winds of change blow once more
    For each death a new life starts

    this was really mind blowing

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    The first stanza is very good and that sets the tone for it. the poem is very good as a whole. it touches every stage of the life. Lovely lines. very good one.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Cindy dear,
    Wow!First of all congrats.What a Beautiful write.
    Winds of change blow once again
    The repetition every time is opening into a new phase of your life span.You have compiled it in beautiful order.
    You will be a pillar of strength for your generations to come.5/5
    Take care.
    Love.
    Alka

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love the repetition. This haunting piece heartfelt and flows wonderfully. I agree it is one of your best. This is the kind of piece deserving of a nomination!

  • 9 years ago

    by Deana

    Cindy,this is really beautiful,life is forever changing .sometimes its so hard to keep up with it all.An excellent write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lisa

    Winds of change blow once more
    Glimpses of future hopes and dreams
    True love opens her heart to heal
    Happiness hers again it seems

    I love it...Great work 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    Oh this poem such a sad poem... i know the truth u are facing in your life. without ur husband it is so difficult to accept joys of life...

    sometime i think your most poems about your husband.. you write for him becoz u love him..

    but you know first time i felt that your this poem is about you... i saw the reflection of your sorrows in your this poem.. maybe while writing this poem you were thinking about your sorrows....

    the sorrows. that still burn inside you.... the grieves. that still hurt inside you... such a sad poem...

    sometimes... somewhere. you are so alone... i know.. im so sad..

    cindy my prayers are with u

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    Oh this poem such a sad poem... i know the truth u are facing in your life. without ur husband it is so difficult to accept joys of life...

    sometime i think your most poems about your husband.. you write for him becoz u love him..

    but you know first time i felt that your this poem is about you... i saw the reflection of your sorrows in your this poem.. maybe while writing this poem you were thinking about your sorrows....

    the sorrows. that still burn inside you.... the grieves. that still hurt inside you... such a sad poem...

    sometimes... somewhere. you are so alone... i know.. im so sad..

    cindy my prayers are with u

    Winds of change blow once more
    Her heart tells her the end is near
    Time to release all life's pain
    She weeps for those held dear

    my favourite stanza....

  • 9 years ago

    by Aish

    That poem is absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!
    i absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!
    Good luck Cindy,
    Aish

  • 9 years ago

    by gracey grey

    I loved how you portrayed life in this poem: every stanza a different picture which I can relate to in so many ways.

    Winds of change blow once more
    For each death a new life starts
    Hers has come full circle
    New memories filling hearts

    Loved the way you chose to end the poem......accepting the inevitable with hope of a new life.

  • 9 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hello Miss C,

    The beginning brings in the succeeding verses very well: it seems to be, nay, is reminiscent of having your head in the clouds as thoughts are "swirling on a breeze" on every occasion the "winds of change blow once more." It prompts a mental image of an aged woman lingering at the patio, which overlooks the ambient area, while musing over the course of her lifetime every time the breeze sweeps past her.

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Glimpses of future hopes and dreams
    True love opens her heart to heal
    Happiness hers again it seems"

    Love, in essence, never fails to amaze me. Thanks to its lasting influence on the human race, having a purposeful life on Earth is feasible.

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Her heart tells her the end is near
    Time to release all life's pain
    She weeps for those held dear"

    As I come across this verse, my heart wrenches in pain due to the viable truth of life being a constant change. (I just want you to know, Miss C--and I hope I'm not being ridiculous--that, even though I have never met you in the flesh... I love you!)

    As the "Winds of change blow once more.........", the ending--laying emphasis on the continuity of life--ultimately blows me away.
    It is a very engaging read, to conclude.

    Love,
    Debbie

  • 9 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hello Miss C,

    The beginning brings in the succeeding verses very well: it seems to be, nay, is reminiscent of having your head in the clouds as thoughts are "swirling on a breeze" on every occasion the "winds of change blow once more." It prompts a mental image of an aged woman lingering at the patio, which overlooks the ambient area, while musing over the course of her lifetime every time the breeze sweeps past her.

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Glimpses of future hopes and dreams
    True love opens her heart to heal
    Happiness hers again it seems"

    Love, in essence, never fails to amaze me. Thanks to its lasting influence on the human race, having a purposeful life on Earth is feasible.

    "Winds of change blow once more
    Her heart tells her the end is near
    Time to release all life's pain
    She weeps for those held dear"

    As I come across this verse, my heart wrenches in pain due to the viable truth of life being a constant change. (I just want you to know, Miss C--and I hope I'm not being ridiculous--that, even though I have never met you in the flesh... I love you!)

    As the "Winds of change blow once more.........", the ending--laying emphasis on the continuity of life--ultimately blows me away.
    It is a very engaging read, to conclude.

    Love,
    Debbie