Comments : Silence ((Angels are a memory))

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    "Bloody, gauged hearts break
    shatter, glittering on the pavement of a chest
    telephones scream through the silence
    and still the angesl are unheard"
    -That was my favorite stanza, showing how horrible a broken heart can be. There was a spelling error, I know you probably know but I just would like to tell you in case. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Bloody, gauged hearts break
    shatter, glittering on the pavement of a chest
    telephones scream through the silence
    and still the angesl are unheard
    --fav. part
    used good words

  • 15 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Gabby.......this is in my opinion your best work........the line...

    thump thump gushes the dying heart

    god that says everything...You always did know how to make me wonder......luv ya......xoxoxoxoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    I really enjoyed this one as well, another 5.

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Very well written... loved the way u have weaved your thoughts here! keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    Love it absolutely....keep it up !