*This is my first attempt... comments are welcome.. :)
**The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.
For the format that you put it into, I thought it was a very intriguing read. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this piece. Your imagery was great and your rhymes never seemed forced. Excellent work!