Backwards

by Dawn aka Dominique   May 24, 2008


*Tip read this poem from right 2 left*

Again once us be could it wish I how
Hints strange such me give you
Friend a than more is me of thought your that

Silenced you keeping is inside something and
Pain a it's and, too me in it got I've
Violence the wants one no, us for better its but

Mates current our and, sides our have both we
Juliet and Romeo, Shakespeare's like kinda
Stake at are others cause, off it play gotta we but

Tip serious the on be to now but
Know wanna just really I
The chip, shoulder your off fall it let

You and me between stay always it'll
Share if you, share I'll and
Too did he if freak I'd, out find won't she

Curious probably are you know I
Convo our in up came this how
Furious me makes guessing, to had I but

Response your for much very you thank I so
Wonders imaginary my of all to
Nonchalance with act I surprise your to, but

Easy I'm think to you want don't I for
You at back get to tryin' or
Sleazy just that's, girl a got you knowin'

This say to courage the had only I if
Paper on down write of instead
Amiss to come ever wouldn't feelings our

feel to come you what is backwards if and
Me to comes it when especially
Deal can we together, alone this in not you're

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  • 10 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    I loved it!!!!! it was so cool that you made it backwards!!!!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    I think this was a very clever idea, a poem that, when read, it has to be read backwards. like many others, my head hurt afterwards, but it was a nice read, the most different i've read in a long time.
    however, there were some parts of the poem that i did not understand, or had small grammar problems (I'm a bit of a grammer/ punctuation freak :] )

    "Silenced you keeping is inside something and
    Pain a it's and, too me in it got I've
    Violence the wants one no, us for better [it[']s] but",

    ^^ ^^ - it[[']]s - its needs an apostrophe

    "Tip serious the on be to now but
    Know wanna just really I
    [[The chip]], shoulder your off fall it let"

    ^^ ^^ - [[The chip]] ?? What is that supposed to mean??

    "You and me between stay always it'll
    [[Share if you, share I'll and]]
    Too did he if freak I'd, out find won't she"

    ^^ ^^ - "Share if you, share I'll and" which reads, "and I'll share, you if share", i think it's supposed to read "and I'll share, if you share",

    "This say to courage the had only I if
    Paper on down [[write]] of instead
    Amiss [[to]] come ever wouldn't feelings our"

    ^^ ^^ - [[write]] - is supposed to be [[writing]],, take away the [[to]] and it would make more sense.

    "feel to come you what is backwards if and
    Me to comes it when especially
    Deal can we together, alone this in not you're "

    ^^ ^^ - i love this stanza the most.

    The wording wasn't so great, but i could understand what you were saying.

    4/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Oh, how unique. It's a clever way to right, but as I read through it, I found grammar mistakes in your poem, and at times, the sentences didn't make complete sense. I feel that you should read over it, and edit it. Keep the style, it's amazing, but it's even harder to comprehend when your sentences don't all make sense. Again, try showing instead of telling, because that's most of what you do in this piece.

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Nice. Unique,and i loved it....

  • 10 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    WOW! I DIDNT FINISH YOUR POEM BUT I LOVE HOW YOU DID THAT HOLE THING ON READING TI RIGHT TO LEFT I LOVE THAT,,,,, THAT IS REAL TALENT I WAS TOO SHOCKED AT WHAT YOU DID, BUT I WILL READ IT THROUGHLY WHEN I HAVE THE TIME BUT GURL SO FAR I LOVED IT IT WAS NICE FROM WAT I READ SO FAR.

    AHAHAH I NEVR SEEN THIS BEFORE

    YOU GOT SOME TALENT I CAN TELL... TO WRITE A POEM THAT IS LIKE A MIRRIOR IMAGE... KINDA HARD RIGHT =]

    I THINK I WILL RATE YOU ANYWAY JUST CAUSE EHEHEH LOL.

    5/5