Comments : A Broken Heart

  • 15 years ago

    by PHOEBIX

    *hug*

    Absolutely beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great choice of words, I hope we both soon get rid of these people or at least the attitude in them...

  • 15 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Now i understand what did you mean when you told me you can relate to my latest poems about my friendship

    it seems you really were hurt by your best friend, it's painful i know how it feels

    "My soul is fading away, and I am so near to die
    Unless you leave and go away from in front of my eye
    Please I don't want to see you
    Because you were just a big liar, and a fake too "
    "So, please leave me alone
    Because you are so abhorred "

    those beggining in these lines just show how much you have suffered and it shows too how much you love that person

    i hope you find a real best friend

  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    This is very good! I like it alot! Awesome!

  • 15 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    Awesome work heba....i love this poem...great job 5/5 !!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Well done! this was an an outstanding poem that was beautifully written!

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveTear

    So nice !

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    It's very painful to get hurt by ur friends..I know how much it hurts...But u know life doesn't stop for anybody,so u just learn and gain experience not to repeat the same mistake...
    U should not give so much trust to people bcoz some just use it to harm u...
    Ur poem is so wonderful and I can feel the bitterness in ur heart...Stay strong and never look back...
    It's been a long time since the last time u wrote a poem...I wish to read new stuff for u bcoz Really I enjoy ur poems a lot..They are so close to me...
    Great job honey..Keep it up:)

  • 15 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Really, really amazing!!! I love it.. You expressed it beautifully & perfectly. 5/5.
    Thank you so much for your comment xox