Comments : Life

  • 15 years ago

    by Lisa

    This was a very good poem... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Wowowow... that was i great true so true poem... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    This is completely true...although very sad....great flow 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by MARI

    Awww what a great poem its so true though this world is hell and it feels like it keeps getting worse!
    great job!!

  • I love this. it soo explains LIFE. good job. 5/5 you should go check out some of my poems.

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That is pretty much what life is all about. and for that i think it is a really great poem. so i give it a 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I loved this poem
    as it opened up
    and showed the true horrors of
    th world and the things
    that society tries so hard to hide.
    But its all true and this is the reality
    of the world we live in
    and the cruelty that life offers.
    Great job.
    It was a really powerful write!
    Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Well this is ahmazing
    and wayy true.

  • 13 years ago

    by SexLoveControlVanity

    That was really great good work

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    End of a matter, spells victory. Against all odds, victory abounds.