You coming out tonight man?

by william   May 29, 2008


You coming out tonight man?

starts me on a craze
fiendish wicked ways
dancing in a daze
my pain is now a haze

what else can i do
i hurt so much over you
i don't know how to make it through
i love you.. that much is true

telling me to find another girl?
these dirty skanks make me want to hurl
when they wobble and swirl
tripping over there own feet trying to twirl

i dance 2 feel good
but always get put in the category that only sleazes should
"I think you misunderstood"
i just want to feel good

again like i did
back when i was a kid
the only way 2 get rid
of the hurt is to dance amid

every1

so am i going out tonight...?
do i even have a choice?
yea, ill b out

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  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    Let again another great poem!! a 5/5!! =)

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    I love this, the way you open it and then jump right in , and the ending's cool. i'd put an apostrophe in "ill" though just so the reader doesnt have to think about it.