this is a beautful poem. I love the way you wrote it. let me point out some very miner errors for you so your readers keep giving it the justice it diserves.

Change:
carry touching my heart

To:
carry on touching my heart

And change:
I cant ask for more

To:
I cant ask for more to show

And lastly:
I love you are you are, please know

to:
I love you how you are, please know

Hey, this is a really good poem! I like the way you had repeated carry on to show what you like this person doing. The idea of the poem is just wonderful. I just don't under stand the last line. Keep up the good work!

This truly wonderful. I treasured it much.