Wow... the emotion and pain was quite clear in this piece.

It's time I see my maker,
Maybe it's time I wake up,
I'm not good for anything and I don't know why?
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
this stanza stood out to me so well. maybe because i'm feeling the same way at the moment.

an emotional piece that reaches out and grasps the heart.

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Go ninja!
super awesome job!

Aww. this is sad.

but some rhymes seemed forced. also the flow gets a little messed up because you repeat the same last line in only some stanzas randomly, however its still a good poem with lots of emotion, just a little rough around the edges.