Silently Fading

Often done, but what made this one stand out was the gentle ending.

"My heart was once a flutter of tiny butterflies."
This feels like an insecure start: 'flutter' and 'tiny' feel like insecure words. It's not necessarily bad, just uncommon.

"Our love was what brought brightness to my life.
My happiness could light the night sky."
Hopeful and vey bold, incontrast to the weak beginning. Especially the last line, it feels like wild, joyous laughter.

"My happiness is silently fading."
Poignant. I don't know why; you can never explain magic. I just really like this line.

Like how you compared before and now

made the reader happy and hopeful
then ended with hopelessness
very sad, but well written

Wow a short but sweet pome there was alot of meaning in it with such few words

Waw
its good poem and sweet, i like the way you discrip how is your love and how its change,with nice flow you did great jop well done 5/5

Short, sweet and to the point. well, not really sweet, more painful. it was beautifully worded and flowed together brilliantly. a moving piece that definitely deserves a 5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~