Wow, this poem had very interesting word choice. Again, the darkness and the deep emotions in this poem were awesome. The imagery was just as great as your other poem, and the rhyming was just as great as well. I don't really like how you write in more of a big long paragraph, but if that's your style.. I stay stick with it. There's really nothing wrong with it.. XD
This is really well creepy. In a good way. It for me was like getting to a very scary scene in a horror movie. The flow was a bit off in the beginning but you got it back so that was good. nice job!