Comments : Demon Feeding

  • 9 years ago

    by Asher

    Its incredible,
    i love it!
    ((5))

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow, this poem had very interesting word choice. Again, the darkness and the deep emotions in this poem were awesome. The imagery was just as great as your other poem, and the rhyming was just as great as well. I don't really like how you write in more of a big long paragraph, but if that's your style.. I stay stick with it. There's really nothing wrong with it.. XD

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is really well creepy. In a good way. It for me was like getting to a very scary scene in a horror movie. The flow was a bit off in the beginning but you got it back so that was good. nice job!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written dark poem seems to personify the human weaknesses that dwell in all of us again Ienjoy a deep poem like this