Comments : The Greatest Gift

  • 9 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    I reallly liked it. Whomever this is written about must mean a great deal. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow. an absolutely very beautiful piece of poetry that i enjoyed to read. a brilliant flow and a fantastic rhyme.

    You have given me the greatest gift in the world.
    It's nothing that can be wrapped, opened, or beheld.
    Out of all the presents I have received from others,
    Your love is the one that my heart will always wield.
    ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
    a simply amazing stanza!

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~