This is my storie this is my pain and never should any one feel ashamed of things that has happened to them know you just need a friend ill help in any way cuz so long i was afraid and didnt know how to take the pain awya so if u just wanna talk write me im a sweet girl whos here for any one who needs a friend

Really good 5/5!

Wow, each time i read your poems I'm amazed. that was so touching and truthful!

I don't wanna pour my heart out on the internet, but i really relate to this poem and it moved me
you described those feelings like exactly how they are, like when you think it's your fault and you're really confused.
well done!
xxx

Its so true !.....5/5

This is a good peom, well written with a lot of emotion 5/5 keep it up

U know,u made me melt in ur feelings and thoughts...I do like the idea and the way u showed it...but the best part of the story that it had a beautiful end that U were happy and that God did really save U:)...good job..keep it up5/5
P.S
So all i could do was (prey)..I think U mean (Pray)..Right!!

This is a beautiful poem, it was filled with emotion.
=] It deserves much more than some of the one linners youv'e gotten.
Great job this poem is well written

Well, there is a lot of emotions in this poem.. And I think it is great how you exprienced praying in this poem...

And it is nice to share expriences, emotions, memories and thoughts...

The poem is nice like this...but if you would want to make it better...you would organize it and put it more...poetic form.

Idea of this poem was good.

What a story...I am so glad for you he did feel remorse after all.
I hope you will pull through without scars on your young soul:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

That was very heartfelt poem. I wish you the best . Keep writting. It helps to clear your thoughts. Hope to read some happy poems too.