Rachel, Oh I love this, its so tranquil, I love the rain, I could breathe and smell the natural drops of rain around me and now I just would love it to rain and stand out there with it, it brings such warmth and peace in just reading these words like it seems you have placed a piece of paper on the ground and let the rain fall onto it and write from its heart, it was just beautiful to say the least, wow, one of the most clear and amazing nature poems I HAVE EVER READ! 5/5
Such an exquisite poem with beautiful nature imagery. I envy your ability to do these forms so easily. Your poem grasps the reader and holds them in trance amazed at the beauty of your words. You are definitely your mothers daughter. Grace, beauty, and nature combined into one poem= excellent.
Well seeing what my name is natuarually i had to look at this poem and i liked it i never seen a form of poetry like this and you did a good job using the right words to make the piece flow even with a difficult rhyming scheme