I think this for me was your strongest stanza:

Cleared my mind from thoughts of you
Talking love and strange taboo
Bled the blade to keep me strong
What felt so right turned out so wrong

I really loved it, it flowed so well and I love your word choice, you just didn't hold onto it for the rest of your piece. If you cleaned up the flow a bit in the other stanzas I think it would be even better.
It was a nice write and an enjoy able read, you did a nice job overall, keep up the good work.