Comments : Only if...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked your poem. Very emotional and touchy. It also has a good flow... Well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Another great poem! I like the "if sometimes" repeating style. once again great pacing, great choice of words, and an awesome poem

    Your Servant:
    D. Johnson.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is a brilliant poem, awesome theme and a very meaningful message, loved it all the way

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful message you have penned in this poem.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    What if? what if poetry did not exsist?
    What if we had no soul?
    Would we still do the stuff that we do, or keep on our lives like we know nothing.
    Great poem, you my friend have talent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hidden1

    Very hott poem... i loved it