I am sure if u did meet n u proposed with this poem there is no way she wud say no
am sure she wud defenitly say yes

amazin one 5/5

Yeah Adel our fren gIrL is wright with wat she said above... u r such a nice gu...

N to this poem... u have written a gem n it was precious, is precious n will continue to b precious forever like urt glden heart..... ur words r golden to... so r ur poems...

Keep up the great petic thing going...

Best wishz... Karan

Thts so beautiful Bro!!!
I agree wth every1 above n I know my Bro is great n soon u will find a very nice gal :)

God bless u

We will start by two then we can be three
To have angles is your choice you are free

Awww Adel, this is so touching! You are going to make a girl a superb husband one day:) I have never met a man as sweet as you, you have such a kind and gentle heart. I am so sorry it had to be broken, but someone will mend it for you, I am positive of that!

Much love and a super big hug,

Ingrid

Nice, your purpose style is qute.
I enjoyed this poem

Nice poem and very great rhyme :) my favorite lines are

You colored my world, you colored my life
And now I wonder, can you be my wife?

I am one of those people who don't like to play around
I want to be your husband so how does it sound?

thatssss wonderful :)

Absolutely lovely...

*You colored my world, you colored my life
And now I wonder, can you be my wife?*

Thats magic ! I hope you can use this poem for someone else very special the near future.

Kevin

Seriously wow! Very emotional and really heartfelt

Zeinab

Sorry to hear would have been a great love story

The lord as definately given u a gift adel...
that'z very sadz to that yall'z love didn't make it this far ;( that'z so sweet of u to make a poem like that for a special person that u hold so dearly! sadly it didn't last :( but great poem the whole thing waz very truly wonderful keep up the great worx peep!
-d

Ohmygeebers;
this was one of the most cutest poems i have ever read.
i barely vote and comment on poems but im giving you a...whatever the highest is...i think its a five :]],

cute<33.

Wow !! Great poem, written in a beautiful captivating way.
This poem must be every girl's idea of a perfect proposal.
Good job. Keep it up.

Really well written. So simple and yet powerful in every sense.

"When something is written from the heart, from deep inside where all feelings are found,
only beauty transmigrates to each soul,
for those words are precious and build us whole."

Keep it up! 5/5

Man I'm sure when you find her, she will be the most happiest girl in the world!! I know you will find her, your time in happiness will come!! =)

This is absolutely beautiful! Enjoyed it very much!

Wa wa wa really wonderful. ? This poem bring smile on my face. If some one proposes like this way. None girl can deny.
at last your note is very sad.
But great job.

bahut pyari poem hai.

I know how hard it is when your eyes find your perfect mate ...... yet it's painful when you know that it's just a dream and didn't come into reality .......'-'
gr8 poem reminds me of gr8 pain

thx ever so much

Wow!!
sadly..
but WOW!!
sooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!

WOW!! this is really so sweeeet..sadly thou

WONDERFULL