When

by Daisy if you do   Jun 10, 2008


When summer sun bids goodnight
Winged creatures have ceased in flight
Stars reflected in placid lakes
No longer dance in mallards wakes

When all the oceans tides have turned
Final flames of daylight burned
Flora vanishes, lush and green
Faunas birth remains unseen

When rapids tire of rushing race
Carvings weathered from stones face
Etched for Eternity two souls together
My love for you ...sincerely, forever

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  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Outstanding write, beautiful word usage. i positively loved it. 5/5 all the best ben thompson

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A wonderful way to express love for someone.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ana

    Omgoshi really like this poem , its beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    Wow, this is so amazing
    this is one of my favourite poems, no doubt about that

  • 15 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very nice....and truly, quite romantic...

    reminds me of the lyrics a terrific vintage song:

    "...In time the rockies may crumble,
    Gibralter may tumble,
    they're only made of clay but,
    our love is here to stay..."

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