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  • 9 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This is a really good poem i liked it alot

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful mixture of love and nature Kay! So tranquil and serene....brings a smile!

    'Stars reflected in placid lakes
    No longer dance in mallards wakes"

    ^love this couplet! Nicely done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    What a beautiful poem of love you have penned. The imagery is awesome.

    When summer sun bids goodnight
    Winged creatures have ceased in flight
    Stars reflected in placid lakes
    No longer dance in mallards wakes

    The picture your words paint for the mind make me feel as if I'm seeing all this right in front of me.

    When rapids tire of rushing race
    Carvings weathered from stones face
    Etched for Eternity two souls together
    My love for you ...sincerely, forever

    I loved the entire piece Kay. This is a forever love you write about. Gives such a feeling of peace. Just want to stay and relish in the feeling.
    Excellent!
    ~Clapping~
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    Awesome... A brilliantly write poem. The last stanza is outstanding. What a beautiful poem of love!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Kay,

    I loved every word of it, it is the perfect gift of love:)
    Thanks for sharing this with the rest of us!

    Love, Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by MELI

    Ii REALLY LiiKED THiiS POEM! iiT KiIND OF REMiiNDS ME OF SHAKESPEARE ... ii LiiKED iiT AND iiT WAS EASY TO UNDERSTAND FOR ME... GREAT JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..=]

  • 9 years ago

    by Debbie

    It is indeed a very well-written poem... The serene ambiance, coupled with aesthetic imageries of the natural world and interminable devotion of lovers, engages the reader in an ethereal realm rooting only in the Mind's Eye. A pleasure to read, nonetheless!

  • 9 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, that's a very nice poem. It flows great. Good job.

  • 9 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Absolutely wouderful poem =)
    the imagery and descriptive writing wer so well blanded with ur great message at the end. 5* easliy

  • 9 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Wow that was absolutely FLAWLESS! 5/5 i love the flow and effortlessness of this poem! keep it up :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on the win Kay.....This is a beautiful poem :)
    ~Clapping~
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    A beautifully written poem. one of the best i've ever read. yer a wonderful poet!

  • 9 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    It all fitted excellently together, you have a real talent for painting pictures

    your servant:
    D. Johnson.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ixora

    Beautiful hun...the imagery and the ending almost made me cry.. you're a very talented poet = )

    *^*crow*^*

  • 9 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Beautiful Love Poem DD. The words just roll off the tongue, of course I've read it over and over to soak the Poem in. That last stanza is awe inspiring

    When rapids tire of rushing race
    Carvings weathered from stones face
    Etched for Eternity two souls together
    My love for you...sincerely forever

    A fast moving young couple, who have grown together over many years, older and wrinkled now, dedicated to each other for an Eternity.
    A wonderful metaphor.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 9 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very nice....and truly, quite romantic...

    reminds me of the lyrics a terrific vintage song:

    "...In time the rockies may crumble,
    Gibralter may tumble,
    they're only made of clay but,
    our love is here to stay..."

  • 9 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    Wow, this is so amazing
    this is one of my favourite poems, no doubt about that

  • 9 years ago

    by Ana

    Omgoshi really like this poem , its beautiful

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A wonderful way to express love for someone.

  • 8 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Outstanding write, beautiful word usage. i positively loved it. 5/5 all the best ben thompson