Comments : Stone Walled Tomb!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    Well written my friend.simple yet powerful lines conveying a message full of pain.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    The way you express your feelings amazing.
    I like this also I have made one poem I am sending it to you Please read it
    Suni raho mein.
    Suna pan sa hai,
    Tum bin,

    Sune pan mein,
    Ham gum se hai
    Tum bin

    Akho mein ek
    Aas si hai ki,
    Tum milo gai,
    Har lamha
    chubhta sa ha
    Tum bin

    Akho ko Talash hai
    Jis chehre ki
    Vo kahi gum sa hai
    Tum bin

    Intzar ki ghadiya
    Kabhi lambi na hozayea
    Vo aag nahi,
    toh kal hi ah jaye

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Amazing work.. i think you're really good! keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobia

    I have always admired your style of writing and this is just another one of your pieces of art :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    So much of emotions have gone through this piece. It's not only touchy but very tragic as well. I liked the way you've constructed the lines and expressed the feelings. One can feel the pain and despair very well. A wonderful write. Very well penned!