Wow, the free verse, and the syllables per line...:D
just spoke to the reader like they should already know what's going on, (and i do :( i'm goin through it :(((( )
but yeah, i just liked the implicit relationship you created :D
Wow, i really like this.
your word choice was simple,
but at the same time, so powerful.
and i think everyone can relate to this.
letting go is one of the hardest things are person can do;;
and i'm still working on it myself.
great write 5/5
This poem I can relate to! It was EXACTLY like that with my ex... I stayed with him waaay to long, I should have let him go half a year before the realtionship ended when he (!!!!) broke up with me.. So yeah, learn to let go! You just inspired me to that more often.. Not just to let go of love but of everything that is a burden to you!
This one is going under the list of my 'favourite poems'