Comments : Wrecked

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem! i love the flow.. keep up tha great work! 5/5
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Very well written discriptive account of an event many can relate to. A good read, just wish it were not so.
    First stanza "tight clothes" to "sexy camisole" for the rhyme with "control"
    Third stanza second line "We feel like the movie stars" to "Just like movie stars"
    As always an opinion. Good write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was amazing. It had some really awesome rhythm. :] Great description as well. :) 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rinji

    Very good I like how you set the poem up it ryhmed nicely it's an excelent style I you should keep up with it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by yblehs

    Awesome poem and its so seriel =]
    it was a little jumpy at one part w/ the flow
    but it was good other wise =]
    i like the 2nd to last stanza
    i gave it a 5-5

  • 10 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    OMG I love this poem it's got great flow and it's really up to date with people and life these days

    But I think you should switch the stanza's 2 & 3 around. I just think it would make more sense considering the scenery of the story.

    But if you prefer and would like to keep it your orignial way I respect your wishes, just thought I'd bring that to your attention great work 5/5