Comments : Trojan

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    I happened to have picked this poem to read because it seems the ones with wisdom are somehow not voted or commented on , so I look for those first
    This one happened to proved me right once again .
    This is a message that needs to be seen and I thank you for writing it for all willing to read.
    Thank you for writing a poem of guidance.
    may God guide your pen as you write each verse and may the treasures of life find its way to your door
    I hope it wins poem of the week , It is entered and it will get my vote 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    This is a very good poem. I hope many more young girls read this, it would do all of us good!! myself included. u got my week i also hope u get this for poem of the week!!!
    5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 15 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Graciously said and this is true to many young girls making mistakes

  • 15 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Excellent poem
    I have read your poem and it touched my heart.Kindly read my poem as well,it is my first poem in this forum,please read it and comment and rank it.Your words are very precious for me.
    Thanks
    Junaid

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is a really good poem.. because for young girls who want to have sex, they may look at this poem and think they should wait.. this poem could actulaly be very benefitial.. and i hope it is.. because i agree w/ you that girls should think about having sex before they actually do. this poem brings through a very strong and important message that every girl should read. great write. 5/5.

  • This poem is really good. i like reading poems that are about life. the bad things and the good things. pros and cons should always be looked at through life. i just hope many other younger girls will read this and hopefully let it catch on in their head. good job.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Patience

    Well said! This is such an important message to get across and you have done a great job expressing it.

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that sends a really srong message to ever person who reads this. and eveybody should pratice safe sex. so i give it a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by mzlovehate

    I like this poem a lot.
    It is very straight forward.
    I think about all of those things you Mentioned and I'm glad I'm not alone about My thoughts; thats why I choose not to have it at all until I'm actually ready.

    Thanx, I hope someone who is sexually ACTIVE READS THIS.