Butterfly [With Identity Crisis]

by NyellMoonlight   Jun 14, 2008


Abysmal elegy whispers nuclear poetry,
artificial within enliven cosmic volcano,
vivid as the stars which sung malediction.

Vanilla secrets touch sunshine sorrow,
planting arcane whispers into iridescent heart.

Monochrome nocturne embraces my butterfly,
tattooing ambiguity across the silver bones,
vivid as the dragons of scarlet glass.

Vanilla secrets touch sunshine sorrow,
planting arcane whispers into wildfire wings.

Illustrated madness sculptures alien anatomy;
"I drank your monotony and fragrant damnation",
erotic epiphany crucifies aura of daydreams.

Vanilla secrets touch sunshine sorrow,
planting arcane whispers into lyrical soul.

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  • 9 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    "I drank your monotony and fragrant damnation",.... hell yeah..that's enough for me, surrealistically dark with a vicious bite...oh the drama! i love it!...passion, passion, passion, without compromise, that's what i adore about your work..and as far as trying to decipher the message behind the words, i got what i needed out of it, and that's what i believe makes an awesome poem.....keep painting pictures, well done!
    john

  • 9 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    As always, your writing is flawless. You're by far one of the most talented poets on this site and I can't even begin to tell you how brilliant this piece was.
    Absolutely breathtaking.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    Yet another fantastic write frm nile...

    5 cheers for this poem.

    Keep writing

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent... impressive word choice... simply astounding..
    you weave such a vivid... superb picture with your words...
    "Vanilla secrets ..sunshine sorrow...wildfire wings"... simply brilliant...

    the whole piece is so captivating...

    "Abysmal elegy whispers nuclear poetry,
    artificial within enliven cosmic volcano,
    vivid as the stars which sung malediction."

    ^^from here on till the end... your poem captured my attention...

    Excellently write...
    keep writing..

  • 9 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    WOW, I must say this poem had superior word choice and vocab words i had to look up, thanks for making pull out the dictionary lol.

    I really loved how you used the word arcane at such perfect times and my favorite stanza was the fourth.

    Vanilla secrets touch sunshine sorrow,
    planting arcane whispers into wildfire wings

    Wildfire wings was also another great word that i didnt have to look up and it really painted an image in my head.

    I just woke up and was glad to read such a great poem.5/5