Black and Gold

Wow...

I really, really like this poem. It's powerful and so vivid, portrayed with amazing descriptions. I like your choice of words from the beginning to the end, along with the message of the poem. I like how it goes from darker tones to its complete contrast.

I usually don't prefer rhyming poetry but here, the rhymes worked very well.
I find this poem quite original, metaphorical in a great way.

I really like your word choice! i love when people write with less common words!
very good! love it!

It is a really a wonderful poem. and i can see that you have become a pholisiphor who talks about his point of view about life.
welldone

Really deep and great imagery portrayed within this beautiful verse....
Very well done!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wonderful poem! It can be very complex and deep, but at the same time the message can come across well and clear. Your word choice was splendid and the fluency fantastic. A very enjoyable read. Excellent work!